I like this, Thorstens version of the mission statement. It is clearer and succinct. I do think we should be using the word salutogenesis - it is the correct ‘scientific’ term for Meta Health and what we do plus, it is a positive reference for our view of health.
Personally, i think there should be a balance of ‘science’ and ‘art’ in our statement, which embodies the poetry and technicality of our craft.